Hi! As I mentioned in my previous post Audrey and I are currently working on re-writing the script as there were parts of it that didn't really flow correctly specifically the flashback scenes.
The main problem was that the transitions between the scenes in the therapist office to the flashbacks were very awkward and didn't really feel natural. For example, the first scene that transitioned into the party the lines that would transition the scene were too important to be brushed off or faded out as the party commenced so we had to find a way to either cut the lines or extend the scene to transition more easily.
Furthermore, we just felt like a lot of the dialogue in the party scenes felt very stagnant and just not natural. We are planning on rewriting these scenes as well but we also know that our actors will use their creative liberties to make the scene really come to life.
Anyway, below I'll attach a little chunk of a revised portion of the script, keep in mind that the script is not 100% concrete and we trust out actors to take the liberties they need to enhance their performance.
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